Wednesday, July 3, 2013

If Only A Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes I feel it's all a dream,
Still can't believe you're gone,
That maybe one day you'll walk through the door,
But life, it does go on.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Jayne Davies 17 July 2013

Thanks Heather! Glad you like it x

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Heather Wilkins 16 July 2013

a beautifully written poem. yearning to be together again. but we are forced to say heaven can wait. I love the contents of this poem.

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Jayne Davies 03 July 2013

Thank you! So glad you like it!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 July 2013

a soulful yearning to walk together once more, beautifully versed. Another irrestible offer from Jayne.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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