-If only you knew what I feel about you,
-If only you thought I was your one and true Love,
-If only you felt something beautiful to me,
-If only you were the one that I love,
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you must dfinitely have felt the flavour of love that your word speak so loud
a wonderful work, kept short and simple it's simplicity alludes to something more... beneath the surface, it was a pleasure to read
this short poem is nice but it would of been nicer if u would off express more feelings to what u really wanted to say
VERY LOVING... BUT YOUR HOLDING BACK WHAT YOU WANT THE POEM TO SAY..... AB
This seems more a true lament than a true anything. I'd like to have heard more. Gw62
thats really good its very sweet and from the heart. keep it up