Monday, January 21, 2008

If Only Comments

Rating: 4.4

I try but can't seem to get myself to think of anything but you
Your sweet gentle words race through my mind
All I can see is the vision of us two
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Ashley Hart
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Pramod Kumar 11 April 2009

Very nice one..........Your dream MAN

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Shimon Weinroth 01 October 2008

echoing of Juliet's Shakespear, don't despair and don't agree for momentary love Elvis is wrong it is not now or never it is now and forever! well versed Shimon

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Austin Zaratzian 05 May 2008

i have a dream similar but it never happens its always gotten screwed i hope you find him

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Amie-Lee ...... 01 April 2008

I love it.....good work

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Grant Nealy 30 March 2008

What happened to make it have to be only for one night, and what would prevent it from happening again?

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Blue angel Florida 16 February 2008

'Let's live as if we might die tonight' Nicely done!

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