Wednesday, December 19, 2007

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I want the rain to fall from the skies above,
And wash away my longing love,
I wish the rain would diguise my tears,
And let me forget all my fears,
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Patricia Grantham 08 April 2013

A very touching poem. Love can do that to you and takes sometime to heal. Appreciate it!

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Gloomy Philosopher 04 January 2008

This poem is full of emotion yet understated, it's lovely, especially the opening

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John Nightingale 19 December 2007

Beautiful and sad. Well written.

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