Thursday, January 25, 2007

If Only Comments

Rating: 5.0

As she lay back in the sand
Sun beating down on her glistening body
She reflected on how good life was
Over the years
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Dee Daffodil
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fanniesson - 07 February 2007

didn't see it coming nice one

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Diane Violet 06 February 2007

Very clever Dee! Unexpected fun, loved it........................Diane

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Chuck Audette 01 February 2007

Well, you know how menfolk love to chase tail.... Fun one, grinning away here. - chuck

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Alison Cassidy 27 January 2007

Dee this is a delicious tale. And the tip of it is so unexpected! Clever piece. Wonderful coda. love, Allie xxxxxxxxx

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Barry Van Allen 27 January 2007

Dee, I have read this three times now, I am still just shaking my head and grinning! SO ANYHOW! When are you throwing your computer out?

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Duncan Wyllie 25 January 2007

Poetic brilliance...so worth the read...Thankyou Dee Love duncan X

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Francesca Johnson 25 January 2007

I had to read this through twice before I guessed it was a mermaid. Very clever, Dee. Love, Fran xxx

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Original Unknown Girl 25 January 2007

is this a golden retriever by any chance? Great read, reminds me of Fran's Brown Eyes..... Lovely write Dee. HG: -) xx

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Trade Martin 25 January 2007

Very cute Dee..., a mermaid.....! ! ! Sharp & nice play on words...! ! ! Best, T.M..

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