As she lay back in the sand
Sun beating down on her glistening body
She reflected on how good life was
Over the years
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Very clever Dee! Unexpected fun, loved it........................Diane
Well, you know how menfolk love to chase tail.... Fun one, grinning away here. - chuck
Dee this is a delicious tale. And the tip of it is so unexpected! Clever piece. Wonderful coda. love, Allie xxxxxxxxx
Dee, I have read this three times now, I am still just shaking my head and grinning! SO ANYHOW! When are you throwing your computer out?
Poetic brilliance...so worth the read...Thankyou Dee Love duncan X
I had to read this through twice before I guessed it was a mermaid. Very clever, Dee. Love, Fran xxx
is this a golden retriever by any chance? Great read, reminds me of Fran's Brown Eyes..... Lovely write Dee. HG: -) xx
Very cute Dee..., a mermaid.....! ! ! Sharp & nice play on words...! ! ! Best, T.M..
didn't see it coming nice one