Wednesday, January 28, 2009

If Only Comments

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If only I see your eyes now
Oh God Help me
Don't think I don't miss you
But I am just full of fear
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Mustafa Khairallah
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

You need to be alive.........to see her angel's eyes.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 29 January 2009

a heartfelt lover's plea, thanks for sharing

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 January 2009

Looking through life with the beloved one. Eyes....dreams.....desires.... a beautiful write, Mustafa.... Keep seeing into the eyes! Best Wishes. Naseer

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beautiful piece. reminded me of me, i dedicate this one with to me!

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sumaira .....ir 28 January 2009

Hey! Dont see the eyes only just go fast and say her that how much you love her unless someone else come and tell her :) that was an advice... Poem is so cute nd adorable.. Such an innocent way to express your love... Well done

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Joseph Poewhit 28 January 2009

Very heart felt poem of love.

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Mustafa Khairallah

Mustafa Khairallah

Alexandria Egypt
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