Thursday, March 15, 2018

If Only.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

If only,
The imaginary
Could come true.
...
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Sandra Feldman
COMMENTS
Susan Williams 29 March 2018

That just spoke to me in heart-breaking terms- -you have a talent for causing your readers to feel not only your yearning but the ones we readers have tried to keep in the shadows in the land of regrets. I am glad you write - you encapsulate the meaning of writing, how it clarifies and reflects the shared experiences of life. 10+++++++ my friend

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Rebecca Navarre 19 March 2018

Breath Taking! ! ! ! ! With Such Beautiful Heart! ! ! ! ! Ever So Powerful! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Kostas Lagos 16 March 2018

Wow, wow and...wow! It is obvious that I love this poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 March 2018

Sandra, such a splendid piece👍👍👍

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Smoky Hoss 15 March 2018

Wow, deeply heartfelt and powerfully moving. Very real.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 March 2018

Imaginary in first stanza and metaphor lies in last..... makes the poem at least a good taste of writing.

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