Thursday, October 26, 2017

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A summers day, beneath an oak tree,
It's broad leaves offer shelter, for you and me,
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James Sebastiani
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2017

A summers day, beneath an oak tree is amazingly perceived and this is beautifully presented through dream and reality in perception with hope of expression of love. An amazing poem is well drafted...10

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James Sebastiani 27 October 2017

Thank you Kumarmani, it started off as a poem about a journey, from the oak tree, into the cosmos, then back to the oak tree, but developed into something else as I neared the end, a tale of loneliness, desire for love, companionship

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