Monday, October 16, 2017

If Only Comments

Rating: 5.0

[Song Lyric]

If only you'd stated
How darkness you hated
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Harley White
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Rob Lamberton 28 March 2024

My heart resonates remembering regrets.

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Ronnie Mc Ginn 28 March 2018

Great lyrics, gave me a Rochk'n'Roll vibe

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Harley White 29 March 2018

Glad you like it, Ronnie! Thanks for commenting...

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Bill Cantrell 21 October 2017

You certainly caught the spirt of the time frame of the painting, the melody belongs there, the song king Henry wrote..green sleeves would hold hands with your melody, very impressive, i must say you have a knowledge of many areas in life and not only that, you seem to be able to comprehend the meaning and spirit of the moment. I always enjoy reading and listening to your works.

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Harley White 21 October 2017

You inspire me greatly with your verbal accolades! Your comments are always much appreciated! Thank you so much… and for coming back to listen to the melody!

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Bill Cantrell 16 October 2017

Are there any other hidden talents stored in the person of Harley white? It stands to reason, a true artist is never limited to just one picture, one poem or song, everything they touch carries something of them, and your words brings to life the characters in the picture as they are the vehicle for your song, I am never let down by your art in any form they take, whether in intellectual terms, poetry or song, they are all intertwined, I will come back to listen to the melody when posted.

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Harley White 16 October 2017

Oh my, such complimentary words send my spirits soaring. I’m glad you will return to hear the melody when it’s approved, since it is part and parcel of the song. Thank you very much!

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 October 2017

A nice poem on love lost. Emotionally strong poem with a nice flow. Touching. Liked it.

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Harley White 16 October 2017

I’m pleased that you enjoyed it. If you know the story, she does manage to regain love, but with difficulty. I also posted a sound recording that is awaiting approval, so if you return to the post, you’ll be able to hear the whole song. Anyway, thank you!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 October 2017

Very nicely penned..! I enjoyed reading it.. thanks for sharing.. regards

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Harley White 16 October 2017

Thanks very much for your comment! The audio file is awaiting approval, so if you revisit it later, you'll be able to hear my melody as well.

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