Thursday, February 23, 2017

If Only Comments

Rating: 5.0

If only I could turn back time
If only I could see
If only a light would shine
If only I wasn't me
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Gerhardus Keen
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Britte Ninad 27 August 2018

And this 'if' would not come as comrade if we do not understand underlying significance of this word. /// greatly written

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Chinedu Dike 23 February 2017

An insightful train of thought, well articulated and nicely brought forth in good diction from the heart. If only we'll accept the fact that in life there's always ups and downs; if only we'd not conceive of life without difficulties... Faith keeps those that keep the faith. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Gerhardus.

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Gerhardus Keen 24 February 2017

Thanks for your review. I really appreciate it.

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