Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Thursday, August 13, 2015

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Oh, that I could speak my heart
And say the things I feel
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Adeline Foster
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Liza Sudina 15 March 2016

Exact and deep words about poetry and the process! I love such a deep analysis of this rare coming out of our spiritual body! And words I want to say Are replaced by words I do not mean; From quiet moments of reflection

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Noreen Carden 12 January 2016

Beautifully written Adeline makes a lovely read

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Charles Darnell 11 January 2016

Very well done. I think rhyming poetry is very difficult to do well. Many poems of this nature feel forced, the poem serves the words, not this one.

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Clarence Prince 25 November 2015

So very true! Oh, that I could speak my heart And say the things I feel.' That's the feeling I have too, but in today's world one has to be careful of what to say; especially when speaking the truth. Blessings to you, Adeline!

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Charles Darnell 22 November 2015

Excellent! I can so relate to this! :)

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Rajnish Manga 15 November 2015

Feelings so nicely expressed. This may happen with anybody. Instead of being uttered, words just get withered away. Thanks for such an amazing poem. But somehow I am tongue-tied, And words I want to say Are replaced by words I do not mean;

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 August 2015

Great thoughts of instant call! ! As one grows long with the muse of life. Nice work.

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Jayne Davies 14 August 2015

Well done Adeline, a lovely poem x

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J.b. Lebuert 13 August 2015

Always, I admire your poetry!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 13 August 2015

Need is real with replace words. Very interesting poem shared really. Amazing composition....10

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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