. IF ONLY
Oh, that I could speak my heart
And say the things I feel
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Very well done. I think rhyming poetry is very difficult to do well. Many poems of this nature feel forced, the poem serves the words, not this one.
So very true! Oh, that I could speak my heart And say the things I feel.' That's the feeling I have too, but in today's world one has to be careful of what to say; especially when speaking the truth. Blessings to you, Adeline!
Feelings so nicely expressed. This may happen with anybody. Instead of being uttered, words just get withered away. Thanks for such an amazing poem. But somehow I am tongue-tied, And words I want to say Are replaced by words I do not mean;
Great thoughts of instant call! ! As one grows long with the muse of life. Nice work.
Need is real with replace words. Very interesting poem shared really. Amazing composition....10
Exact and deep words about poetry and the process! I love such a deep analysis of this rare coming out of our spiritual body! And words I want to say Are replaced by words I do not mean; From quiet moments of reflection