Tuesday, July 7, 2015

If Only Comments

Rating: 4.8

“If Only I had not drunk and drove”
“If Only I had gone for a morning walk daily ”
“If Only it had not begun to rain”
If Only I would stop saying “If Only”
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Shankaran Kutty
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 March 2016

In our troubles and woes of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Howard Savage 16 January 2016

You can't go back and change the past events, but what you can do is let the past be a guide in what not to repeat, if it's detrimental.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2015

Think of no one but self find our from shelf what treasure is there on your behalf?

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Bharati Nayak 20 July 2015

Remember our life is like a sheet of snow That would melt its way by spring So make your snow balls, have the fun Enjoy the thrill it would bring- -Highly motivational the poem tells us to live in the present and to the fullest without worrying for the unforeseen future or for the lost chances that slipped from your fingers in the past.Thanks for sharing such a beautiful piece of poem.

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Shankaran Kutty 20 July 2015

Thanks Bharati for your feedback. Inspiration to write more!

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Chinedu Dike 12 July 2015

The power of positive thinking and optimism well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with lovely rhyme scheme. If the mind can conceive and visualize it, the dream can be achieved. One also needs to take things in stride and let bygones be bygones in other to remain focused. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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