Wednesday, July 20, 2011

If Only Comments

Rating: 5.0

18yrs ago, I held you
A moment short in time
And though you couldn't stay with me
Forever you'd be mine
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Jodie Mayhew
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Melancholy Man 21 July 2011

Wow. Such a beautiful poem. As you read it, you actually feel a tiny fraction of the pain and sadness suffered, but even that tiny fraction is very powerful.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 July 2011

the emotion in the ink touched my heart.liked it.beautiful

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Jodie Mayhew

Jodie Mayhew

Sydney Australia
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