Friday, April 10, 2009

If Only Comments

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If only I had known,
The rules of the game.
I wudn’t have strived for
Love, money or fame.
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shweta advani
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Smiley Hooker 04 June 2009

making mistakes is just part of being human. nobody is perfect, dear. and what is more important than seeing these mistakes and correcting it by not doing it again. this poem will help others understand the importance of sharing experiences...not to degrade your protagonist but to make others realized their own mistakes. very moving! : -)

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Mohit Dhawan 17 April 2009

Its seems like words of a person who is in despair, yet not convinced of what and why certain things happened, but try to make your heart understand.... now let it go, but.....! You have put it together nicely.....

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Gargi Mandal-Mukherjee 10 April 2009

Beautiful...soul-stirring...

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a poem witha lovely concept and flow.........10

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Wojja Fink 10 April 2009

never to late to play again never to to late to let go of pain never to late to see the light never to late to learn wrong from right.....................thank you for the reminder...John

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Jappane Human 10 April 2009

This is wonderful! well done

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