Tuesday, December 9, 2008

If Only Comments

Rating: 5.0

A girl sits in her room all alone late at night
Looking out the window at the world below.
She cries and cries and cries.
She wonders who will save her from this hurt and pain.
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Roxy Gonro
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Adam Pinheiro 21 September 2009

I like it alot: ]. Its got a great message, and nice easy, flowing lines. Is this a true story? Hopefully its not a look into the future-you have remarkable talent that shouldn't go to waste: P.

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George F. Hunter 25 April 2009

Good story line and well written

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