Friday, August 6, 2010

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Lynn Glover 06 August 2010

The summation of your poem is the very painful loss of a lover. If only we didn't have to experience these losses, life would be more bearable. A very good Write. I enjoyed the read. Read any thing of mine, Please. Your friend, Lynn.

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A touching poem. If only...what could have been. Choice is of the essence! Wonderfully written, emphasis was well expressed! ; D

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Robin Machorro 06 August 2010

this was really sweet but sad i really enjoyed reading it great job

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Omar Ibrahim 06 August 2010

it could've been better if you organised it in stanzas..but anyways it's beautiful..10 thanks for sharing

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