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A touching poem. If only...what could have been. Choice is of the essence! Wonderfully written, emphasis was well expressed! ; D
this was really sweet but sad i really enjoyed reading it great job
it could've been better if you organised it in stanzas..but anyways it's beautiful..10 thanks for sharing
The summation of your poem is the very painful loss of a lover. If only we didn't have to experience these losses, life would be more bearable. A very good Write. I enjoyed the read. Read any thing of mine, Please. Your friend, Lynn.