If you only know what’s in my heart;
You won’t stare at me this way.
For you’ll know all the answers why
I am tearing apart?
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very nice write.....i can see your words are real image of your insights
very nice write.....i can see your words are real image of your insights
I love the poem. Its really nice. Somehow, it express all my feeling right now. Great work!
games of 'if only' are like games of 'what if'...very hard on our souls...nicely exspressed emotions here...great work.
This poem is nice because it teaches one important thing which is the presence of caring ones is always important even if it means forgiving the mistakes which we all sometimes make. Nice poem with sincere emotions this is.
you are a sweet heart... so loving and forgiving... A good write from heart 10 for this Rema
although it baffles me, you must have a very good reason for keeping the distance. I kind of understand the feeling...a very good poem. high marks from me.
ok...good arguements there...i get your points well...but keeping the distance... well, come a bit closer to heart...the troubles will end... good poem sincere frank and expressive... ten votes
very nice write.....i can see your words are real image of your insights