Monday, July 28, 2008

If Only..... Comments

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If you only know what’s in my heart;
You won’t stare at me this way.
For you’ll know all the answers why
I am tearing apart?
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Rafique Farooqi 28 May 2010

very nice write.....i can see your words are real image of your insights

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Rafique Farooqi 28 May 2010

very nice write.....i can see your words are real image of your insights

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Rafique Farooqi 28 May 2010

very nice write.....i can see your words are real image of your insights

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eanDeGreat de Psychotics 10 September 2008

I love the poem. Its really nice. Somehow, it express all my feeling right now. Great work!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 August 2008

Yes I liked this.........thanks

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Viola Grey 10 August 2008

games of 'if only' are like games of 'what if'...very hard on our souls...nicely exspressed emotions here...great work.

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rohit sapra 01 August 2008

This poem is nice because it teaches one important thing which is the presence of caring ones is always important even if it means forgiving the mistakes which we all sometimes make. Nice poem with sincere emotions this is.

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Rema Prasanna 29 July 2008

you are a sweet heart... so loving and forgiving... A good write from heart 10 for this Rema

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Estrella Baldemosa 29 July 2008

although it baffles me, you must have a very good reason for keeping the distance. I kind of understand the feeling...a very good poem. high marks from me.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 July 2008

ok...good arguements there...i get your points well...but keeping the distance... well, come a bit closer to heart...the troubles will end... good poem sincere frank and expressive... ten votes

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