If Only Comments

jess, , that was a very powerful peice, , and if you have ever had a dream in life to do something with the way that you put together your powerful words, , , dont give up that dream, , cuz if only you dont give up your dreams that you can make them happen! ! ! ! ! ! i do love to read your poems...(hugs)

she gave up on herself. the only one that couldof helped her was herself. she didnt ask for help so no one gave it to her. people now-a-days exeptt others to just help them, but how can others help you whenever you havent acknowledged that you need help. i admit that i do it too. i exept people to just come and help me with stuff, but i need to ask them for help. people cant read minds, so why exept them too? great poem. thats why its always good to ask someone how they are. to show you care cuz if you show someone you care then they'll come to you when they need help. great poem. i hope all this stuff makes sence. lol. sorry if it doesnt.

WOW! ! ! ! ....Do you have any idea how POWERFUL you words are? That was AWSOME! ! ! ! !

wow that was....amazing i loved it! ! ! ! ! 100! ! ! ! ! ~Hazel G.E

great poem....sad, but really great :)