If Nothing Could Speak Comments

I think the poem is quite good but i lurved the way the 'she' explodes into the next stanza (and the way you emphasise this in that stanza) after about four stanzas of 'nothing.'

How nicely you have brought everything from nothing! Only a magician can do this trick and the next you have done it. Good writing.

Very deep poem. I like the way you had all the ages say things, I think they are true. Wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it. And thankyou for commenting on my poem ~Am I Insane~

our life goes in and out hiding then open fearless finding a true voice as this lovely poem so clearly shows