must i read books that tell me
who my maker is, written by you
though you come in many faces
claiming redemption and guidance
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Wow, very moving indeed, touching. You are very deep my poetic friend, great work.10ed!
Be true to yourself my friend and you wont go far astray. You write your feelings with clarity in well written poetic prose
one of the best poem u made Amy..........enjoyed reading it...sebastine.....
Penned with a profound pathos that penetrates. Well written.
Dear Amy u must feel proud of this piece of work as being an artist. Well Constructed keep going! Regards Yas
very heartfelt poem, what is expected of you, but staying true to yourself, something i once had a problem with, wonderful poem with great descriptio, thanks for sharing
Very well written poetic description of what you wanted to be and what you are? I think its time to get rid of such questions and do what you want to be. Get your body free of cage and cubicle. Get your soul free. Its the time now and the only way out.......Best of luck!
I love this piece, every single word from the beginning to the end... and the last verse is my favourite :)
An absolute cracker Amy. The shallowness of some, so very well described.10