Friday, January 9, 2009

If Not Me Then Who? Comments

Rating: 4.8

must i read books that tell me
who my maker is, written by you
though you come in many faces
claiming redemption and guidance
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Amy Ludidi
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Laurie Hill 19 January 2009

An absolute cracker Amy. The shallowness of some, so very well described.10

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John Smith 18 January 2009

Wow, very moving indeed, touching. You are very deep my poetic friend, great work.10ed!

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Ivor Hogg 15 January 2009

Be true to yourself my friend and you wont go far astray. You write your feelings with clarity in well written poetic prose

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gr8t peace u got here milady

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Sebastine Humaemo 14 January 2009

one of the best poem u made Amy..........enjoyed reading it...sebastine.....

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Penned with a profound pathos that penetrates. Well written.

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Yaseen Anwer 12 January 2009

Dear Amy u must feel proud of this piece of work as being an artist. Well Constructed keep going! Regards Yas

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Brianna Trombley 10 January 2009

very heartfelt poem, what is expected of you, but staying true to yourself, something i once had a problem with, wonderful poem with great descriptio, thanks for sharing

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Sarah Sisson 10 January 2009

been in the cubical myself....thank you for sharing this one

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 January 2009

Very well written poetic description of what you wanted to be and what you are? I think its time to get rid of such questions and do what you want to be. Get your body free of cage and cubicle. Get your soul free. Its the time now and the only way out.......Best of luck!

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I love this piece, every single word from the beginning to the end... and the last verse is my favourite :)

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