Saturday, August 31, 2013

If Not For You Comments

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If not for you,
then for who,
will it be for,
you walk in the room,
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Dennis Field
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Roseann Shawiak 23 October 2013

Beautiful expression, and totally true about what or who you are inside. It's more important and lasting than beauty. Very good poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Queeny Gona 31 August 2013

Wonderfull theme and you have expressed it so well in the write with an alluring title. Everything in this world will fade away one or the other day and so beauty. But then that lives long is one' character that leaves its impression even after a persons departure. Loved and enjoyed the read. Voted 10+

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