Sunday, November 3, 2013
If Not For Humanity Comments
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We are on rampage
Not able to mange
Our animal like hunger
Which emanates from anger?
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9/6/2025 3:54:55 AM # 1.0.0
Great message in well chosen words. Steven Avolio12 hours ago I enjoyed this poem. It has good imagery and cadence. It is well thought out and it convays a good message. Do you have an averion to usang the word, a and an in your poems? they would flow so much better. Examples are line one, We are on rampage, instead, We are on a rampage.2nd stanaza line one is, Think of simple future, instead of Think of a simple future. Second line second stanza, we are running out time for sure, instead We are running out of time for sure. Is it a langue issue or a choice? Consider it. Your friend Steven. Comment 1 Comment+1 cool