Tuesday, September 13, 2011

If My Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

If my soul were the whitest rose,
It could never be white enough;
If my heart were an amber stone,
It couldn't hold in its amber cup
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Patti Masterman
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Hans Vr 15 September 2011

Fantastic first stanza Second stanza is writtten in a different tone, still very poetic. Overall good poem, Patti.

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Jim Troy 14 September 2011

Such depth covering any doubts a love would ever have about their lady fair.... and the passions just on fire Great love poem. I have saved this one... It is above a 10 Jim Troy

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Eric Cockrell 13 September 2011

strong, and passionate... love this one!

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