Thursday, April 30, 2015

If My Heart Was A Door Comments

Rating: 4.5

A winter moon in a frosty sky
I’m a seagull that’s soaring high
Sweet as crescent moon, crazy it may seem
That you shot me with your ethereal moonbeam
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Joen Coronel
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Chinedu Dike 29 October 2015

Lovely romantic piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. An insightful poem without good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Joen. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Rutvi Padhy 03 May 2015

@JoenCoronel Nup: -)

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Joen Coronel 04 May 2015

must be asian. Asians are kinda great when it comes to lit.

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Rutvi Padhy 03 May 2015

Wow *_* now tats......*speechless* 'if my heart was door' beautiful thought....I cn read it again n again.....amazing.....the whole poem...n the last line....wow: -D

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Joen Coronel 03 May 2015

Thanks. Are you a native American?

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