Monday, September 14, 2009

If My Heart Gets There First Comments

Rating: 5.0

If my heart gets there first
It will be easy to follow
No mountains are high to climb
No seas are deep to dive
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Indira Babbellapati 20 September 2009

to follow what one's heart desires...

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 September 2009

A beautiful poem of a wise poet. Follow your heart and it'll take you anywhere-just know where you NEED or SHOULD to go.

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Louis Rams 15 September 2009

a very beautiful write! if my heart gets there first, for your love i will thirst. a ten just on the title

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Obinna Eruchie 15 September 2009

The words are beautiful in a heartwarming way especially these ones, 'If my heart gets there first/ It will be easy to follow...'.

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The Title is a very creative one and this is such an inspirational poem Ahmad as you explore the miracle of life with gusto.....if we all did this what a wonderful world it would be. 10 Karin

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Sonya Florentino 15 September 2009

beautiful first line 'if my heart gets there first' - indeed in everything, desire comes first....we dream, then we follow....

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Christina Phan 15 September 2009

wonderful job 10+ keep it up

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 September 2009

Where there is a will there is a way.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 15 September 2009

very good! ...............................

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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