Tuesday, June 4, 2013

If Mortal Hands Gave I The Power Comments

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If mortal hands gave I the power of the deepest oceans
My quest would strive to fill the world with love devotion’s,
The romantic legacy of the white crested waves would
Taint the rivers with magic potions,
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Unwritten Soul 19 June 2013

If we could be a leader, just be fair just be fair and everything will be okay. a great wake up call write! for all of us because everyone is a leader at least for their own life_Soul

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Valerie Dohren 15 June 2013

Great poem Ken, enjoyable read - have you read mine entitled This New Eden, of similar content. W

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Captain Cur 15 June 2013

Soldiers back to mothers, wives and children. A telling line. Strange each one of us has peace in our power but most are unable to accept and actualize that fact. A great heartfelt write.

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Valsa George 14 June 2013

A beautiful notion of a world united in harmony and living in eternal brotherhood! How nice the world would have been if not torn by opposing ideologies and petty jealousies! ! Enjoyed! !

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Patricia Grantham 11 June 2013

Hello Ken! This is a very beautiful poem. If we all would come together as one this world would be a beautiful place to live in. Even the animals as you so well written about will dance with each other in harmony. Yes a world like this is possible for God initially made it to be that way. I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks.

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Shahzia Batool 11 June 2013

A desire for peace and an ideal world, this sending back of the soldiers to go back to their mothers!

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Lorraine Colon 06 June 2013

What a wonderful idea. I think I would love to live in your world. I hope God reads this poem and gets the hint. Then if things start improving in the world, we'll have you to thank. Good job!

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Marilyn Lott 05 June 2013

Very cleverly written, Ken Loved it! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Joseph Anderson 04 June 2013

A sincere and moving write-If you only come to be. A reverent and thoughtful, prayerful poem. Well done, my friend

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