Sunday, November 2, 2014

If Money Grew On Trees ……….. [what Money Can And Can'T Buy; My Wishes; Personal; Short] Comments

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I'd buy a wife or three or four;
so far I've used just love and luck.
The result: one of us marches out the door;
to me, that result ……sure does suck! !
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Abekah Emmanuel 06 November 2014

hahaaha....Of course money never grow on trees! I like the title and the content of the poem as a whole. This is a poem that, I think, has a very frank and appealing theme. Of course, what you would have done if you had the means isn't bad at all......To combat crimes and make sure, people like me have food to eat, is a pretty idea. Nice poem Bri......Well done!

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Brian Johnston 06 November 2014

My God Bri, we truly are related! Offspring of the same monkey some might say if one goes back far enough! And though your poem can't compare to my 'The God Machine' which takes the content of your poem here to an entirely new level, (because God is my co-pilot) , there must be miscreants somewhere who will actually enjoy your poem more. Stop TIVOing my dreams though will you! HA!

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