Wednesday, September 17, 2008

.....If Love Were Like Water (Best Love Poems) Comments

Rating: 4.5

If love were like water
I'd build you a fountain,
And if love were like stone
I'd bring you a mountain.
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Charles Wiles (Best Love Poems)
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JT 07 December 2021

Nice

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Chinedu Dike 13 November 2021

A beautiful rendition of words.

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Susan Williams 21 September 2020

oh and I would give it a multitude of tens if one were allowed to- - so since I cannot I will give it a 5 star rating

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Susan Williams 21 September 2020

Sometimes you fall in love with a poem the instant you read it and all you want to do is read it again and again- -well, I have fallen in love with this one and shall sit here and reread it over and over again.

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Chiori Mathew 30 October 2019

That is the real sign of true love not all about materialism everytime nice one Pls comment on my work IGARA CHICKEN

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johnathan overton 02 April 2019

this was a great poem and I like it

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Simon peter 28 February 2019

I wish poems could be more than 5 stanzas

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Chandan Dey 15 September 2018

Yes, love doesn't have any particular shape.It remains in everything in an abstract form and glorify them. Chandan

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Peninnah Ng'ang'a 23 August 2018

And that should be enough!

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Nixon Griffith 21 July 2018

Fantastic, very short sharp and well thought out.

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cycus mango 26 May 2018

it reverberated my heart bravo

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Okafor chinonso 25 April 2018

How I wish I had such tone,,,,,,,charles is a nice talented poet

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Sylvaonyema Uba 17 April 2018

If love where like water I'd build you a fountain. A beautifully expressed poem. Simple and musical. A good use of the Octave device. Sylva Onyema Uba

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Ayoola Olasunkanmy 01 April 2018

Short, But Lifted My Heart Nd Awaked My Soul.

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Thalia ferrell 21 March 2018

I love the poems can`t choose my favorite one I 'll love them all

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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2018

Lofty verse elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions. Beautiful rendition from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Charles and do remain enriched.

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Haoran T 14 February 2018

Short but thought-provoking!Thanks for sharing~

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Aron oddi 14 February 2018

I’ve read this a few times now. And still think it’s beautiful l Thanks Charles

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TAMIA GEOF 26 December 2017

short,retrivative inspirable

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jullianne 09 November 2017

im going to present this in my project

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