If love were like water
I'd build you a fountain,
And if love were like stone
I'd bring you a mountain.
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oh and I would give it a multitude of tens if one were allowed to- - so since I cannot I will give it a 5 star rating
Sometimes you fall in love with a poem the instant you read it and all you want to do is read it again and again- -well, I have fallen in love with this one and shall sit here and reread it over and over again.
That is the real sign of true love not all about materialism everytime nice one Pls comment on my work IGARA CHICKEN
Yes, love doesn't have any particular shape.It remains in everything in an abstract form and glorify them. Chandan
How I wish I had such tone,,,,,,,charles is a nice talented poet
If love where like water I'd build you a fountain. A beautifully expressed poem. Simple and musical. A good use of the Octave device. Sylva Onyema Uba
I love the poems can`t choose my favorite one I 'll love them all
Lofty verse elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions. Beautiful rendition from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Charles and do remain enriched.
I’ve read this a few times now. And still think it’s beautiful l Thanks Charles
Nice