Thursday, December 4, 2014

If Love Was A Forest Comments

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If love was a forest
I tip toe the climb through its beating heart
There is lost love, the dry deaf leaves
Strewn ground high and spread thick with utility
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Suburban Lovechild
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Melissa Patty 24 January 2015

Wow! This poem is absolutely amazing. I love the way you have used so much emotion in this. I think your very talented :) x

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Chinedu Dike 04 December 2014

A nice love poem written in poetic diction with beautiful analogy and similes to drive home the essence of the poem and the poet's conviction. I like the articulation of the poem as it brings to light the bliss of love in the inner recesses of the heart. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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