~ IF LOVE NOT GIVEN ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
26.09.09
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If Love is not Given...could you taste the love? it seems like u taste it deeply, and if love is not given and how could write this sweet poem? ...because u know how love is, and how did u know how love is? because love is given to you...love always has place in pure heart, Like this poem!
u are an interesting writer and its great to know your style
Amazingly sweet poetry… spumes dousing of emotion is dulcet… mellifluous… honeyed ‘Your entire floral love décor How I’ll keep wreath If love not Given in my soul? ’… Indeed love to be kept wreathed in soul…to rejoice…it’s the body that doesn’t love we for but …readers are better learned than me to interpret this poem… 10++ Dr. V
Flow of love continues through resiprocation.If the humand bond is bereft of love from one end, disruption occurs.Wonderful write, choice of words has a uniqueness.
This is the best poem of yours! Poems are an ernest yearning to reach to where we truly belong, and we can be there only when we break the bars of bondage by the fiery insane emotions of love and freedom which is verily expressed in the beautiful poem of urs. Many Thanks for sharing.10++++
Why fire of tune Ignite in my soul? Why lu......... ------------- Only because, you are in love! This is the only answer to all questions in this poem, I dare to tell..A lover's mind is full of questions with No proper answer! ! Nice reading...
Written with poetic zeal. Your flair for the dramatic carries the day. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra
i liked this poem well written very poetic it is...Thanks for sharing...10+++
How can love not be given, when there is so much love in a persons heart. Only a false love can do damage to ones heart. A great write. Your friend Lynn
If love not given...many questions are asked...love given or shared answers many questions. Excellent write, Niv, a 10+++
highly poetic. in life such formalities are not really required. love is something known to each other.bright idea.thanx for sharing voted10 surya
Why sway me By bedecking smile Like refulgent sky? .................................you too are engulfed with question of 'why'if love is not given but still you keep on smiling.. great poetic skill that flows in your behavior and words. really amazing and i feel delighted with each words of yours, be blessed always and keep smiling as I am by name... hasmukh.....10 read mine.. a dead end a need to do
How can love not be given? There wouldn't be life if love not given. An inquiring poem that only one's heart can answer. Love this write Niv.
How can love not be given? There wouldn't be life if love not given. An inquiring poem that only one's heart can answer. Love this write Niv.
A good great poem Niv. This is a thought which many of us at times realize, feel the need of love in our heart in proper sync. to match the euphonic beauty of nature around us created by God. This poem reminds me of one Rabindrasangeet- hope you've heard that...'Jodi Prem dile na prane, bhorer aakash bhore dile emon gane gane...' Jodi sune na thako, sune niyo.... Blessings & love, Kaku
How can love not be given? How can a volcano not erupt? How can wind not blow and how can water not flow? A Lovely poem to say the least.
Excess of emotion destroys a poem. Emotion must be controlled. But I must say you have poetic genius.