Thursday, January 14, 2016

If Love Comments

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If Love was school
I'll never be late
I'll be the first to reach her gate
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Yine Fai
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Chinedu Dike 21 January 2016

Beautiful depiction of the voyage of pure bliss that is love, and its might experience, insightfully penned from inner recesses of the heart. Your employment of appropriate similes to drive home your conviction is both appropriate and poetically remarkable. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Yine. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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