Monday, July 12, 2010

If Love Comments

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Oh beauty if love remains a thousand years
Would it really lessen the tears?
O souls who have to be torn apart
Lover’s vows remind us now to start
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Dove Allen
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 31 July 2010

Inverted pyramid or cascade poetry…time is not matter but the depth that all matters… ‘tears’…’ frays’… ‘hear’ ~ all will be blamed salved…by ‘Magic Wand’…Love…questionnaires are very aptly addressed…and *ILYP…… thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 * ILYP I Love Your Poetry n

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