Monday, February 28, 2011

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if you had told me that stars are twinkling to make me smile,
probably, I'd have had doubts in my mind;
if you had told me that the earth would cease its existence
once with the rapid blink of my eyes,
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Agatha Eliza
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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2016

Once with the rapid blink of my eyes! Nice work.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 February 2011

Fantastic poem having lots of fresh ideas. The poem is rich in imagery and style. Nice write indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Agatha Eliza

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