If Life Were....... Comments

As inspirational as the poem that inspired you, its brief but addresses your subject in a tight and fluid manner. This really hits home, I'm not a real poet, but I take comfort in its art as a means of meditation, although I know I overdose on the fantasy as an escape from reality, but then who doesn't? . Lovely stuff, words of comfort just like chocolate.

A truly bright and hopeful look at what could be. Nothing to add or say. Excellent piece.

Simple and rings a beautiful truth.