Monday, March 3, 2008

If Life Was An Open Book Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just think how much easier
Life would be...
If life was an open book
...
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Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
Barry Van Allen 16 March 2008

Dee, Isn't that the way it should be? When you read a book, do you go to the last page? ... and even if you do, do you know the story? B.V.A.

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Chuck Audette 04 March 2008

I think my life is an open book, but written in a language I can't comprehend. The pictures are funny, though. Loved your metaphor, Dee! -chuck

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The notion of determinism, a pre-planned journey to an identified destination, always intrigues me. A pensively, engagingly penned piece, sad ending n all. t x

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Ann Beard 03 March 2008

It probably would but we would loose all excitement and intrigue. I respect the thought that went into this poem. Well written.

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Original Unknown Girl 03 March 2008

Wow! You certainly haven't lost your touch Dee! This was a really gripping read. Loved it, your book would be more than interesting (am sure) HG: -) xx

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Howard Johnson 03 March 2008

Most excellent, thought(Open Book) , and well written, All the best to you.

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