Monday, July 18, 2005

If Life's A Stage Comments

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If life's a stage
Please turn the page
Because I don't know
Where I should go
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Jeremy Williams
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Samuel Nze 19 July 2005

Patience, Jeremy, the script is in God's hands; pray, and He will tell you all you need to know, and where your act starts; He is the director, and you are a leading actor, believe me!

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Ben Banda 19 July 2005

Try restructuring your tittle to capture the reader's eye as something unique if not re-invented. you know, many have talked about this. otherwise the poem is philosophical.

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Jeremy Williams

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