Wednesday, July 2, 2008

If Life’s A River Comments

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If life’s a river
Flowing on a course
Long proven to be the best way
To reach the sea, then flow on
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Anita Atina
COMMENTS
Al Ramos 16 July 2008

You did it again, I will try to reach my goal the easiest way possible following the path of the river. Fine write.

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Stone Granite 13 July 2008

How wondrous a poem you write. Yea, all or everyone, as does the river, seeks the easiest path to the sea, . As the river avoids the rocks in its flow, so do we avoid the toil that is before us - in the end, our goal is the same - to reach our destination with the least impediments.

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David Champion 03 July 2008

Another wonderful and deeply wise poem which encourages us to calmly accept the natural course of our lives... beautiful...

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2008

that is the ultimate destination of river...meandering or not...so has so is life

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Ency Bearis 02 July 2008

life is a river to seek its own level...nice write Anita Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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