If Jesus was born today
it would be in a downtown motel
marked by a helicopter's flashing bulb.
A traffic warden, working late,
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Hi, You had me thinking. But you right. May God Bless you with His wisdom so you can keep the good work. You are very talent. All the best to you,
this is one of a kind poem keep trying and i will give this poem a ten you have a true talent which is morethen i can say because i have only made 4 poems but anyways good luck and i would love to see more of of your work
you are absolutely correct! i think if Christ truly existed in these times, he would indeed be mocked or exploited. poignant and well written! Jake
I just wish the Disciples could have read this and had a hearty laugh around a table somewhere...
Wow, What agreat poem!