Friday, January 3, 2003

If Jesus Was Born Today Comments

Rating: 4.6

If Jesus was born today
it would be in a downtown motel
marked by a helicopter's flashing bulb.
A traffic warden, working late,
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Steve Turner
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Richard Antwi 23 July 2020

Wow, What agreat poem!

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peyton 24 January 2020

you are a great poets

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Morella Gerardus 14 March 2008

Hi, You had me thinking. But you right. May God Bless you with His wisdom so you can keep the good work. You are very talent. All the best to you,

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Winter Lees 28 May 2005

this is one of a kind poem keep trying and i will give this poem a ten you have a true talent which is morethen i can say because i have only made 4 poems but anyways good luck and i would love to see more of of your work

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you are absolutely correct! i think if Christ truly existed in these times, he would indeed be mocked or exploited. poignant and well written! Jake

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Michael Shepherd 11 March 2005

I just wish the Disciples could have read this and had a hearty laugh around a table somewhere...

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