If It Were Up To Me Comments

If it were up to me I would not ever let you die I would caress your heart with our lullaby. Hi Shelley, that lullaby for me would be my precious husband's favourite song 'Summertime'. What wonderful thoughts your precious couplet brought to me this evening, Thankyou so much.--Melvina---

Shelly, WOW! I like romantic poems. This one is just beautiful. It grabbed me and made read each word, each line. Written from the heart and will stay the test of time. Top Marks from me. Thank you for sharing it. David

This is a lovely but sad poem. Sad because in spite of what you're saying, it might already be too late. S x