Tuesday, April 17, 2018

If It Were Not For You Comments

Rating: 2.5

Amity would still be a lexeme with no allusion.
Infatuation would still be a poem I recite to my bosom.
Inclination would still be a bare in my gist.
Rapture would still be a rayless frost in me.
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Kwenadi Gaaje
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Kwenadi Thobejane 28 April 2018

Thank you so Much Nika..

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Nika Mcguin 17 April 2018

Amazing write, I love the richness of the language used here. However, I think my favorite line is: Rapture would still be a rayless frost in me. This is beautifully written, well done!

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