Thursday, June 14, 2018

If It's Meant Comments

Rating: 5.0

The flowers get it's fragrance
It blooms and smiles at nature
The bees are attracted to it
And find the nectar from it
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Rini Shibu
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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 June 2018

Rini, such a remarkable piece....10+++++

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Rajnish Manga 15 June 2018

Laws of nature can easily be applied to real life situations. Nice poem. If it is meant for you it will come to you But those in the shade never see the rays (of sun)

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Lamar Cole 14 June 2018

This is a very nice and very creative poem.

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Robert Murray Smith 14 June 2018

Rini, your poetry has gone up several levels. Beautifully crafted write on nature.++10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 June 2018

The nature's law has been absolutely inscribed in this poem.The fragrance of flower and relation with bees, the sunshine and relation with life are nature's law. These are fantastically expressed. Thank u dear Rini, top marks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 June 2018

What' nature's law is absolutely inscribed in this poem. The fragrance of the flower and it's relation with bees, the sunshine and relation with life are nature's law painted fantastically. Thank u dear Rini, top marks.

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