Thursday, September 15, 2005

If It Is Not Really You Comments

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Isn’t it sad that antiseptic words
(Words that smile slightly, even)
Can become all that is left
(As a jaded memory: maybe?)
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anasuya balla
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Raynette Eitel 19 September 2005

This poem has so much more depth than the usual poem I read here about lost love. Your first stanza is absolutely wonderful...and you developed the thought quite well. You are a true poet! Raynette

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Mary Nagy 15 September 2005

Very nice Anasuya. Sincerely, Mary

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Theorem Thetruthserum 15 September 2005

Great poem...I loved it.

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