If I Write You A Poem Comments
If I write you a poem, will your heart melt?
To tell you all the feelings that I felt
while lying in your arms under the covers
no one will ever know that you are my magnificent lover
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Thank you @ Stephanie. The site will not let me reply to your comment.
I love your poetry! It is simplified with a song from your feelings.
Your poem is a comfort to those who love and write poems. Thank you for your lovely comments.
Thank you Jane. I think most people who are on the site would agree that it is each of us that Inspire one another. I'm glad you like the poem.
My heart melted when reading your lovely poem, for a flower to give it’s scent is to pen her heart...just a wonderful moment, I do love the essence of your poetry..with your words I feel your touch...and that is a special place in poetry
When you reply to my poeme, your comments are always heartwarming. I believe this is one of my older poems that I wrote. Being in love certainly can bring out words that we didn't even know we had. So happy to hear from you and thank you for your comment.
I wrote many romantic pieces in the past but lately my feelings are like the colder weather here where I live....frozen! Hopefully with the warmer weather to come...and I hope soon...I shall be able to write more love poems! Thank you for your comment and reading!
If I write you a poem, will your heart melt? This very inquisition can be expanded into a thesis! A lovely poem on love and longing...10
(cont.) to MyPoemList. i'd tweak the last line, but.......... i might tweak** YOU too, if you wrote ME a poem! ! ** *verb: tweak 1. twist or pull (something) sharply. synonyms: pull, , tug, twist, twitch, pinch, squeeze yeah, SQUEEZE! ! ! bri :)
SOmetimes certain relationships are toxic. thank you for reading and commenting.
Ms Aqua? This is both sensual, provocative. And, exotic. Nice.
Beautiful dreams drenched with the dew drops of desire and romantic richness! Well done my friend!
What a nice comment and descriptive too! I appreciate you reading many of my poems and commenting :)
With deep thoughts of love, it is a very heart warming poem. Thank you for sharing.
A delightful poem written with love, desire and longing..loved it! +++10
And I love you name, dear Poetess! So nice of a comment. Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Thank you dear poetess for your comment! ! Notes of love keep romance alive!
A beautiful poem of love. Very heartwarming. Enjoyed reading it.
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7/20/2025 11:03:09 PM # 1.0.0
i LIKE IT. I MAY PUT IT IN MY NEXT 'SHOWCASE'. BRI ;)