Sunday, March 15, 2015

If I Woke Up, Black... [skin Color; Response To Diana Van Den Berg; Short; Humour; Fantasy] Comments

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If i woke up black, to....
sleep I might go back.
Not because I'm 'white',
but I'd NOT believe my sight.
...
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Bri Edwards
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Bharati Nayak 17 April 2024

Skin colour is what we see outside.Can any one fathom the emotions going under a particular skin colour?

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Bharati Nayak 17 April 2024

A nice poem Bri! I have not read Diana's poem, Your poem gives an insight into the shock and wonder one would experience if his skin colour changes that way.

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2024

Many poems go years, full of tears, praying for anyone to READ. If anyone besides me HAS DONE MORE than read, their comments must be invisible indeed! ! bri : )

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Bri Edwards 18 February 2020

five years and no comment besides mine! ! ! ? ? ha ha to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 15 March 2015

OOPS! bleaching skin should read dying skin black. i must have been thinking of a sequel: If I Woke Up White. bri :)

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