Saturday, October 17, 2009

If I Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish nothing more than to sit,
Doing nothing and liking it.
IF I wish.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Patti Masterman 17 October 2009

Shades of Walt Whitman here, just slightly..You are so diverse in your writing styles; never know what to expect next..(smile)

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Jean Dament 17 October 2009

I like how you stated exactly what you wanted or wished for in this poem. I can relate to this; as I often wish these same things. We all need some space of our own & escape from the worries of this world. Thanks for sharing. I gave it a 10. Ravensong

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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