Tuesday, October 4, 2011
If I Were You Comments
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If I were you I would be prouder than death
To know my place before hand, a gain
Why wouldn’t I use my name again and again
To gain the treasures of this world?
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Asif Andalib
10 October 2011
You dream of a better world but the reality is cruel. God can change it but we only can do it if He wants. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
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7/21/2025 10:25:26 AM # 1.0.0
What a great poem, David! The world we live in is what we make of it. I think you are trying to say how you would change it, but that you alone don't have that power...