If I Were You Comments

Thanks for the note ok Linda I will take care of that I will see it Taylor

I would suggest changing U to You and UR to Your or You're. Depending on the useage. Good write. Peace my brother in Christ! Linda

Hello Zero. An interesting poem and enjoyable read. The word is you not u and your not ur I hope that helps. Loyd See my new poem An Old Soldier

Thanks Amy wait my next poem

fantastic poem shows potential: P