If I Were With You Now Comments

God cries for you in the rain....such a delicate line, that carries so much weight! Your bundled up kindness, in written verse, a pleasure to unwrap. Visiting your pure emotions, like spending a day with a much welcomed friend. PEACE

understanding and concerns.. another awesome work! !

You are such a gifted writer and no matter what i read u find a way to to connect in me. I enjoy feeling as though i am a part of what u are writing whether it is sad, longing, or free. this one made me feel a sense of understanding and deep friendship. many times in life people just need to see or hear that little encouragement. thank you.. and please keep writing. I look forward to more.

@ Sandra Feldman, Thank you very much for feeling the feelings. Your comments are more than kind. Thanks for the generous 10/10. Truly inspired.

Intense, deep, full of feeling. Such sweet and calming words. Never a suffering soul was consoled in this tender, sentimental and beautiful way. Anyone's pain would be a lighter burden after this. Really touching! ! Beautiful flow and style too.10/10

@ Lyn Poulton Thanks for your appreciative comment on my poem. I am inspired.

@ Lasoaphia Quxazs, Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate your good words of advice.

@ Naida Nepascua Supnet, Thank you very much for reading my poem and for the sweet appreciation. I guess my chest expanded by a few centimeters after reading your appreciative comment. Thanks.

@ Ivana Radan-jamnicki, Thanks for reading my poem, liking it and leaving your kind words here.

@ Victoria King, Thanks for reading my poem and appreciating it.

@ Geetha Jayakumar, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your comment here. I appreciate!

@ Beach Girl, Thank you so much for the appreciation. Hope you would find time to read some more of my poems and offer a critique. Comments from discerning readers like you are very inspirational for poets and writers.

@ Gary H, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your inspirational comment here.

Beautiful thoughts and words..

@ Valsa George, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your comment here. Our secret lodge is a wandering abode on board a starship called 'imagination'. Smiles... Loved your comment.

It is a lovely thought, but in reality when you think about someone like this, they can feel it and they just feel well and content with the thought of you. Keep on with your mental messages and you will be healed also. However when someone sends hostile thought to someone, the sender is the one who suffers and not the one who should of receive it. What we give out returns to us many fold, so be careful what you send out. Always send out kindness and lovely thoughts and your life will be blessed.

what a very gentle and assuring IF If one reads this and is in pain, she will look forward to your arrival and be unburdened instantly. Nice poem as ever.

NIce... so gentle. I like this poem!

i like how you put I can see clearly, you are in pain now. I wish I were with you, to hold you In my arms and give you a big hug. To look at your eyes and assure you Of my friendship your work is really good!

@ Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving a poetic remark there. I am truly inspired.