Saturday, December 20, 2008

' If I Were To Write A Song' Comments

Rating: 2.8

If I were to write a song for you
it would I think... be written in my tears.
For the love I feel is Oh so deep
It has now been... for many a year.
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Linda Winchell
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Dagimawi Tujuba 31 October 2010

pretty adorable writing: the kind for me to look forward to.it's beautiful

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Obinna Eruchie 24 July 2009

A lovely sad piece penned.

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Barbara Terry 10 June 2009

If I were to write a song, it would be to teach the world about love, acceptance, understanding, trust, and the vibrancy of life. If I were to write a song. This is a very heartfelt poem sis, and is full of soul searching and pain. Love is a fickle commodity at best, and yet we need it in our lives for stability and companionship. When love is from the mind it can trick us into thinking it is the real thing. When love is from the heart it is said to be true. But when love is from deep in the soul from both partners, then it is forever. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing this painful and heartfelt message. Love & hugs, your sister in Christ our Lord, Barbara

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 May 2009

A beautiful poem, Linda. A love song indeed, sad and soft. Best Wishes Naseer

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Micron 24 April 2009

That was a beautiful poem thankyou for sharing it with us hugs micron

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Vernon Eaker 21 January 2009

I love this for me it flowed deftly with powerful emotion.

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Kimber Harrison 20 January 2009

It's really really beautiful! I'm rendered (semi) speachless.

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Maxislam Beauty 28 December 2008

this is nice poetry, very deep and emotional, I like it.

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 20 December 2008

Full of a lot of emotion, deep, and very beautiful It waz well worth the read Scale 1-10....10

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Linda Winchell

Linda Winchell

Chicago Illinois
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