Wednesday, May 6, 2009

If I Were To Tell You... Comments

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And if I were to tell you
That I hate being near you
It’s a realization
That I’ll never win.
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Jim Butler
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Denim Kerr 07 May 2009

Holy cannoli Jim-Bo! ! ! You are so talented and your poems rhyme too! I can never get mine to rhyme... I really loved this poem :) I think every person in the world has felt this exact same feeling at some point in their life before, but it still sucks anyway.

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Yvonne Selase 06 May 2009

a terrifying truth we all have to face something. beautiful poem

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Melissa Black 06 May 2009

: (horribly beautiful sad, but amazing. you are such a good person, this isnt fair huh?

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